Saturday, 18 July 2015

i have been making a chapter book

i have been reading a chapter book and making one too. it is so much fun. my chapter book is called Emily's life i is my first time making a chapter book it is a lot of work but it is so much fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love chapter books my fist chapter book was Eerie Elementary. it is a little scary well o lot scary but not for me.

Here is the chapter book if you'd like to read it:
Emily’s Life – by Samantha
Chapter 1

Ones upon a time there was a lonely princess her name was Emily. She lived in a palace in the jungle. There were two best friends, but Emily could not fit in with them. She had best friends all ready. She wanted to join in with them not her best friends. their names were Slink and Samuel. They were sister and brother. Slink and Samuel want to have a beach ball party and the other best friends Lucy and Sabrina were having a slumber party what should I do said Emily. She ran and in her room she finely got it. She will go to half of the beach ball party and she will go to half of the sleep over.

The next day it was the day that Emily performed!!!!!!. She had never performed before. And it was the day that she had 2 party’s to go to. Its going to be fun. She is the main role she’s the main girl. Emily’s role name was Lulu  She got to dance with her crush. It is fun acting.

Chapter 2
The party’s

She went to the beach ball party first. She played and played with her best friends.
Hours went bye it was time for the play. She danced sang laughed and walked gracefully. She did every thing right. It was time to go to the sleepover.
Any one is welcome said Lucy. Everything was going so fast. They ate candy and they watched movies she stayed up late like the other girls. When she woke up she had breakfast. Then she fainted because everything was going too fast. A few minutes later she woke up from fainting.

There still was a long time until they had to go home. There was still 1hr left.
Emily knew she should take it easy when she fainted.
When she got home she told every in her family that she fainted.
The mother of Emily She was very upset but the mother of Emily. She knew that she learned her lesson.

Chapter 3
They finally rote a note (The sisters )

The sisters were at a dance camp in Australia. They also were doing swimming in there camp. I will do the camp next year. I will be 7 next year. I am taking swimming lessons soon. 4 weeks of it 4 days a week. I herd a bang it sounded like this BOOM BONG BANG I screamed. It was scary. MOM I AM GOING SIMMING WITH MY BEST FRIENDS. ok sweetie go ahead.

I swam and swam. My Slink was very impressed. Lucy was there she said amazing skills. Lucy reminded me of Makayla my sister and Slink reminded me of Mariah I missed Mariah and Makayla. It was sad i am sad. I miss them I have 1 more day with out them. Its bean a day are they stuck.? I hope not. Because da is with them. They stayed up all night talking and talking. The next day they came back. It was 9:00am I rain to the car it was so exciting I said. Your back I said.

Chapter 4
The scary time with your sisters

I herd I BANG BOM BANG CLINK TOMBOLL did you do that Makayla? I said that did you Mariah? I said that Did you do that mom? I said that Did you dad I said that NO said all of them I said shhhhhh do you want the monster to eat you NO then shhhhhhhhhhhh. everyone quietly said ok. She herd nock it sounded like this. Nock nock BING nock nock nock BING then Emily went to the door there was here crush it was a prince he gave a thank you card to her. It said thank you for helping me practice the ball room dance for the play. Thank you for the card said Emily. We found out the monster was there dog they laughed and laughed.

Chapter 5
Thank you’s from every one

There were 10 cards at the front door they were from misses Samantha and mister great they said wonderful thank you for joning in with us for the school play. and flowers from them to and there were 8 more cards another was from misses Nancy said you are so grown up she did a sad face on hers and another was from mister smile face I laughed he beautiful there was still 6 left
But they all signed the card.

The end
Thank you for reading this chapter book I had a little help by dad and grandma and mom

3 comments:

  1. Great sounds in your story! I can really hear them. I love how much emotion you weave into your story Samantha. Fantastic story writing!!

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  2. HOLY MOLEY! you wrote an amazing story Samantha!! It was fun to read and very exciting with all the strange sounds but I'm glad it turned out to just be the dog!! That was a very funny twist! I hope you will continue to write stories! XO

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  3. That was such a fun story Samantha! It had twists, turns and lots of fun noises! I was a little scared there, but glad it was only a dog!!!

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